Feedback? 

So I wrote part 1 of “My Plan” a long time ago and then wrote part 2 in the last few days. I’m not sure I like what I’ve written, but I’m going to give it a few days before I pass judgement.

If you read it, your feedback would be appreciated. I know what I think is wrong because I know how I intended it to be vs the final product, but I’d like to hear what you have to say.

Click here to read part 1.

Click here to read part 2.

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